Master Oh My Master Comments

I love the last part of the poem.........! All are victims of the cruel fate, awaiting and dreaming of some kind of escape. The clients who approach the fortune teller and even the bird who picks up the tarot cards dream of better environs when they will be freed of all shackles of life! A powerful observation and statement of life!

'Oh master my master! Can't you write my fate in a white envelope, I have been serving you since long, so long, that I may pick for myself, with a write inside, thanks blue bird, you are free and may go back, to your lonely spouse! ' Our lives are lived half in finding peace inside a cage, and half in dreaming of flying one day.. The master of our Fate is there and still not there.. Maybe the saying that ONE IS THE MASTER OF THEIR FATE holds a lot of truth, but for that to become a reality, we need strength.. And most of the times we just lack that.. Thank you for sharing Akhtar sahaab..

Good poem sir well written I ejoyed the read thanks for sharing...

A work of broad vision n deep insight. Beautifully written. A wonderful commentary on life's harshness.10

Written from a place of great understanding

This story and its narrative beautifully underlines the harsh realities of life around us. Thanks. when and how his beloved will favor him with love / you are my master / no, I am wrong / I am a slave of my hunger / Oh master my master! / You are also a slave,

And you be surprised that my pet name at home is MITTHU. Ha ha ha just on lighter side

Wow grrrt penned., ..... Loved reading it..... Thank you sir for picking such a beautiful and untouched topics of a fortune teller bird...grrt