Monday, November 13, 2017

Master Of Your Fate Comments

Rating: 5.0

My crystal ball is hazy, but through clouds I see a form,
a shape so damaged that it seems too fragile for the norm.
I don't suspect that words of mine will resonate with you,
but listen with much more than ears, at words I knoware true.
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Shaun Cronick 15 September 2020

Lodigiana your crystal ball maybe hazy but my opinion is crystal and clear cut, another poem that when reading you wish it wouldn't end. It holds that poetry excitement element from its beginning to your mesmerizing end line reveal. A wonderful and magical message. And I thank you Lodigiana again for sharing and writing more than a touch of poetry class. I wish you well and remain poetry enriched. Shaun.x.

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Tom Allport 27 November 2017

a positive poem of leaving the past far behind and to look ahead to pastures that are not blue? .................well penned LP

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Lodigiana Poetess 27 November 2017

Thank you so much Tom..I love your description of ‘ Looking ahead to pastures that are not blue ‘

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