Master Of Your Fate Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

Master Of Your Fate

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My crystal ball is hazy, but through clouds I see a form,
a shape so damaged that it seems too fragile for the norm.
I don't suspect that words of mine will resonate with you,
but listen with much more than ears, at words I knoware true.
Whatever ails you from the past has left a lasting scar
that no one close can yet erase, or from your memories bar.
It dominates your waking day and infiltrates your night..
It colours everything you do and makes you loath to fight.
But fight you must to keep the demons on your shoulders still,
and give you half a chance to once again restore yourwill.
That will to say "the past is past and cannot me define,
my future is a better place and one I can design.
I won't forget but can replace the misery oncefelt,
and take on light within thatdarkness once wherein I dwelt"
Please let me help to find a way to make yourpast a place,
where memories fade and joy appears and slowly will erase
the torment, and the sadness, that has dominated you,
and open up the blinds to let thewarming sun shinethrough.

Master Of Your Fate
Monday, November 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: change,future,hope,past,together
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 15 September 2020

Lodigiana your crystal ball maybe hazy but my opinion is crystal and clear cut, another poem that when reading you wish it wouldn't end. It holds that poetry excitement element from its beginning to your mesmerizing end line reveal. A wonderful and magical message. And I thank you Lodigiana again for sharing and writing more than a touch of poetry class. I wish you well and remain poetry enriched. Shaun.x.

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Tom Allport 27 November 2017

a positive poem of leaving the past far behind and to look ahead to pastures that are not blue? .................well penned LP

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Lodigiana Poetess 27 November 2017

Thank you so much Tom..I love your description of ‘ Looking ahead to pastures that are not blue ‘

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