Saturday, April 18, 2015

Master Of The Universe Comments

Rating: 4.5

Beyond sand and shore,
vast waters of a mighty sea
spread out before Him;
its waves— spirited, steadfast,
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Ken E Hall 12 November 2015

Our Master is shown so well as the waves of life always carried forward in the surging waves of the sea the might of the oceans just a small picture in Gods strength with the mighty universe...regards

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R B Seals 03 July 2016

Regretfully, I managed to overlook your comment from last November. Please forgive my error in not responding in a timely manner. That aside...thank you so much for your insightful comment regarding the writing. I appreciate your time and effort responding to the work. Thanks again, Ken...and best wishes!

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Godfrey Morris 25 May 2015

Awesome poem. I did enjoy reading this write.

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R B Seals 27 May 2015

Thank you, Godfrey! I greatly appreciated your courage in approaching this writing. Because of the religious undertones, I fear some readers are influenced by their convictions and beliefs and hence, unable to maintain objectivity as their open-mindedness is put to test.

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Kelly Kurt 18 April 2015

A thought inspiring poem, RB. Thanks

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R B Seals 19 April 2015

Thanks, Kelly, for your kind words!

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Gajanan Mishra 18 April 2015

we are at the whim of the creator. I like it.

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R B Seals 19 April 2015

Gajanan, thank you for your response and understanding. For many, influenced by childhood religious doctrines, the ability to view the poem's message objectively can be problematic. I appreciate your open-mindedness in your reading of this work. Thanks, again!

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