Master Of The Perfect Word Comments
He came to me in a foggy night
Into sorrow tears I accepted his words
From darkness he shows me a bored world
Offering me a life out of space and time
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A moving composition, really a beautiful poem. Love and add 10. The last stanza is beautiful- 'Tears of sorrow wake me up In the midnight only the moon see me so deep Memories from a drowsy life Now – master – is time to leave.'
Dear fellow poet Allan Macli Borges, keep working on those big ideas. Keep on selecting strong words and put them nicely in well balanced phrases. You have a future in poetry. Time will prove this. Keep working your new poems always with love and devotion. They are your children...and if well brought up by you they will be also children of the universe!
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7/19/2025 12:24:59 PM # 1.0.0
a perfect ending for a good poem.... Now – master – is time to leave....is a beautiful line....the +++ line of this poem... keep riting...let me see more! !