Master Of Disguise (Prose) Comments

This is really an amazing work you use words like a painter's brush the words you choose really looks alive and strong so that readers come drifting in emotion i really love it to read again and again thanks for sharing

Me and you should become best friends because i just fell in love with your work. Once again Sameera, love love love ;)

you have challenged the hypocrisy of a disguised person at the end.fabulous~nb

You write with such ease and clarity another great write!

WOW, you are very promising. You make us see and feel it.

At the very beginning you have enunciated that this piece isn't a poem.Good! Your love life is is so emotionally brought out. and the imagery is very fine!

very well written... oviously someone in love... very emotive but a passionate heart try to remove dark....

beautiful write i love the imagery in your writing and the message was well undearstood

nice job very well written. keep writting

You did well in this poem, you let all the mind tell the story with the streak of your emotion too..it was a good write to release your mind from tracked by dark! i have to agree with Wini, in stanza your write will be easy to read but this is a good write Sameera_Soul

I have one too, but you can describe so well my feelings that i want thank you. Well done Poet.

Hi this Wini Jose. Your poem does tell me that you have the callibre to be a poet. But I think you are supposed to concentrate a little more on the way you write a poem. It should have a little more of rhyme scheme and paragraph formation.