Master Builder Comments

A great masterpiece indeed, Ghazal. Thank you very much,

Words dance glamorously in the silence of the mud of bricks You will construct the magic towers of the world gust (crust) . Whatever had been shaped, like thunder of emotional burst digs …digs in insomnia of rapid nightmare… Time runs and I am not going to catch a falling star. Master Builder: a drama by Henrik Ibsen Go and Catch a Falling Star: a poetry by John Donne Novum Organum: a philosophical book by Francis Bacon (16th century) A very fine poem…quoting John Donne, Francis Bacon, Henrik Ibsen.. a poem of this calibre is rare to find here.. i enjoyed it while reading and rereading it.. thank you very much dear poetess. tony