Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Master And Commander Comments

Rating: 5.0

Coon hound bays at the moon
Moonshine soaked master hides behind his gun
Nose to the air, eye on his prize
When the hunt ends with empty bags
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Adam Holmes
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Delilah Miller 02 July 2008

After reading it twice, I really appreciated the skill you crafted each stanza to have a perfect ending and hit your point exactly. Besides, I like pyshcology terms so you got me with hedonists. It's absolutely perfect Colette

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