Saturday, August 10, 2019

Mass Hysteria Comments

Rating: 5.0

A dark figure appears and attacks
shoulders feel a heavy load
teen aged girls feel pains and start screaming.
Take It Easy Siti,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 August 2019

If i was a larki I would have said this USS ANDHERE MEIN AGAR MAIN EK LARKI HOTI TERE BAHON KOE PAKAD LETEE PHIR JALLA KAR JYOTI DEKHTEE TERE/YANI KAY USKEE NAZR KYA THEI KHOTEE KASH GIRLS WERE NOT SUBJECT OF MASS HYSTERIA IT @17 HAPPENS EVERY WHERE WORLD OVER IN CANADA/USA THEY SHOOT ALSO DID YOU KNOW JA SIR JI

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 August 2019

A very caring, thoughtful and informative write. Sometimes there are instances in life that we can never explain. This occurrence has been in the news too in our country, the Philippines, also on teen age students. A well conveyed and wonderful poem.

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Khalid Saifullah 10 August 2019

Such a thoughtful and informative poem!

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Sy Wong. 10 August 2019

" The scariest thing I see is a face of pure evil." This kind of evil you can see but sometimes you would not have a hint of evil. Thank you Akhtar for sharing.

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Jane Campion 10 August 2019

In the poem of darkness there are screams from everywhere. Mass hysteria writes chilling stanzas. Am imaginative poem with great images.

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