Sunday, October 18, 2009

Masquerading. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Such fragile masquerade dresses
And secretes her within a veneer.

Disguises her turmoil in best
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Fay Slimm
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Stephen Stirk 28 October 2009

Superb piece, Your talent is no masquerade. You are indeed a wonderful wordsmith and poet. Best Steve

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Laurie Hill 25 October 2009

A lovely write..feelings under wraps are so hard to keep there....

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Georgia Girl 19 October 2009

This is SOOO GOOD, it is so hard to hide such feelings and so relieving to be able to let them show...10

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Ian Bowen 19 October 2009

Fay, perfect poem...perfectly written.10/10 Ian

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Ann Beard 18 October 2009

How charming Fay, the complexity of womanhood very well expressed. I enjoyed this very much. Kind regards Ann

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Sonya Florentino 18 October 2009

what a charming poem! ...of how love can disam even the most guarded.....

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Daniel Kempson 18 October 2009

Fay this is a beautiful pice of writing top marks and thankyou for your support Daniel

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Carol Gall 18 October 2009

lovely poem fay a story in all your poems 10

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Ken E Hall 18 October 2009

Very well this lady is presented in her masquerade until your words disarm her who seems comfortable in excuses then this charming end+++++10 Luvli poem Fay regards

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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