Friday, March 16, 2007

Masquerade Comments

Rating: 5.0

Confusion, desperation
What could this be
Is everyone lying to me?
Turn one way, then another
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Michelle Tiddy
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Marci Made 16 March 2007

Michelle, your descriptions of all that's around you and what you're feeling are beyond real and don't we all worry about the end? The core of you is not really lost, and I know the 'you in you' will be found...Not forgoTEN....another keeper for my list.....marci :)

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Life is a roller coaster just got to ride it! (apparently according to some cheesey 90's boyband!) . There is so much here in terms of imagery - pantomines, masquerade balls, fairgrounds - no wonder you seem so lost. Nice writing. Clair

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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