I loved you more than love allowed
Beyond the break of day
Into the wild and winding woods
Beside the ocean's spray
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No canning processes required! Yes, if only we could sip and swallow memories of special love. Or, maybe we can. Your sweet poem makes the day just a little brighter. Thanks for sharing Susan.
Lovely rhythm, good choice of words, makings of a great poem.
A great poem on sad love penned with such a poetic perfection. loved you more than love allowed And braved the stinging pain Of having known the depths of you And what no more remains Lovely write. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++++