Monday, October 16, 2017

Mason Jar Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

I loved you more than love allowed
Beyond the break of day
Into the wild and winding woods
Beside the ocean's spray
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Susan Lacovara
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 October 2017

A great poem on sad love penned with such a poetic perfection. loved you more than love allowed And braved the stinging pain Of having known the depths of you And what no more remains Lovely write. Thanks for the sharing. 10+++++

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Jette Blackstone 16 October 2017

No canning processes required! Yes, if only we could sip and swallow memories of special love. Or, maybe we can. Your sweet poem makes the day just a little brighter. Thanks for sharing Susan.

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Ravinder Soni 16 October 2017

Lovely rhythm, good choice of words, makings of a great poem.

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Susan Lacovara

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