Thursday, March 29, 2018

Masks Comments

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I do have many masks
Which are kept discretely in the dark cellars of mind.
They surface involuntarily in me
To suit various times and seasons.
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Deep Paul
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This poem was written much before masks became commonplace worldwide. Nice

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Chinedu Dike 23 May 2020

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 April 2018

To find the real me! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us

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Deep Paul 20 April 2018

Thanks for the time and comments.

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Savita Tyagi 11 April 2018

Very thoughtful poem. Exploring your own self and getting to know the varied colors of our personality is a heavy task. Almost never ending since we keep adding layers of new traits on it. Excellent work!

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Deep Paul 12 April 2018

Thankyou madam for the comments

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Perdita Young 10 April 2018

The poem leaves echoes in sensitive hearts...Masks have become such a necessity in modern life, so much so that we find it very hard to be our self.

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Deep Paul 10 April 2018

Thank you for the comments

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 April 2018

It's a wonderful poem! I absolutely agree with you that people use different faces in dealing with different people in various situations! I like the second most! Your poem candidly reflects your inner psyche! Loved the poetic expression! I see a promising literary future in you! Keep it up!

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Deep Paul 09 April 2018

Thank you sir

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 April 2018

Beautiful poem Deep. Masks changes with the time and seasons. The real Me mostly remains invisible including self. Well that's also a part of life. Loved reading it.

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Deep Paul 07 April 2018

Thanks for the comment and time

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Bharati Nayak 02 April 2018

When years slither past, these masks grow in numbers And I am busy hunting within me To find the real me, Wandering somewhere in vast array of these strange masks. And in this struggle, I admit, I have failed miserably. - - - - - Yes, we hide our true emotions and project our stronger self to the outside world.Over the years we get stifled on being unable to express the truer self.A fine poem.

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Deep Paul 02 April 2018

Thank u for the time.good day.

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Valsa George 01 April 2018

A deep and profound write Deep! We all wear masks and they stick into our muscles that it will be painful to tear them off....! Beneath the facade, we hide our real entity and in course of time we have to rummage for our actual identity!

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Deep Paul 01 April 2018

Thank u for reading.good day

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 March 2018

I do have many masks Which are kept discretely in the dark cellars of mind. They surface involuntarily in me..joyous mask, angry mask........ a very fine poem and thinking....... thank u dear poet. tony

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Deep Paul 29 March 2018

Thank u for your time and comments

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Rini Shibu 29 March 2018

very much impressed with your writing style. Smiling face do have hidden sorrows, so called mask..Well penned

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Deep Paul 29 March 2018

Thank u for time and comments.

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