Masked Man Comments

Very delightful to read despite its tragic element and serious message. There is much I could say, but I only want to comment about these first lines. solitary figure stealthily scales the creaky steps on a frigid moonlit night - dogs whining in unison with the gusty whistling winds. The man in a mask approaches the bed with measured pace and remorselessly steals between the sheets coarsely snapping the switch. Every line has at least one word, and many have several, which calls for attention and evokes a strong image appealing to the senses, all of which become involved.

What a lively and light-hearted account of what for many is anticipated as a terrifying experience. I know my Jerry has been referred to a 'sleep therapist', but thus far hasn't got round to making an appointment. Perhaps this poem will inspire him to check it out. I know it must be rather awkward sleeping like the Phantom, but the result sounds soooooo worth it. Thanks for sharing this one - and so engagingly too. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥