Saturday, December 31, 2011

Masked Charade Comments

Rating: 5.0

searching, where to find answers
how to end this masked charade
hiding that I'm slowly dying inside.
a deep cut, carved upon my wrists
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Virginia Pecho Gely 09 January 2012

I seldom feel my own pains in reading a poem of another. The sadness when shared is less painfull, isn't it Silentpoet Girl? Keep on to your right to write....Your works are blessfull.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 08 January 2012

and that's what i do...test the chance of fate. this is quite a brilliant and amazing write.

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Salema Khatun 07 January 2012

this is a very good poem..i like it.....keep it up

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Shadow Girl 06 January 2012

great, powerful, hauntingly beautiful write...liked it a lot....relatable -SG xoxo

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The 4am Poet Worm 06 January 2012

you paint the darkest pictures inside my mind SPG....

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(De Va) 05 January 2012

again to leave my wrists weeping one that might end this charade such powerful vision this brings to me....., your words are filled with the very life your body is missing...blessings and smiles my dear friend.

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Kara Towe 02 January 2012

Very well written poem. Hard to read though with such sadness. Your poetry is filled with great deepth, and emotion, so few writers can come close to your talent. Keep penning you are gifted.

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Hope Anderson 01 January 2012

Wowthis is really good and it explain wat u are going threw i feel your pain grl but things are going to get better ill be keeping you in my prayers grl :)

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Hope Anderson 01 January 2012

Wowthis is really good and it explain wat u are going threw i ferl yoour pain grl but things are going to get better ill be praying for u k :)

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Donnie Wolff 01 January 2012

i like this, alot...

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 31 December 2011

Your inner pain will one day cease, you'll begin a new life, life without sorrow and tears, where your rists wont have to cry crimson tears....superb poem my friend...

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Alicia Meyers 31 December 2011

Very very descriptive, and very amazing. (: Fantastic Job(: All of your poems are. (:

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Dave Walker 31 December 2011

A fantastic poem about inner pain. An emotion packed poem as always. A great write.

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Dave Walker 31 December 2011

A fantastic poem about inner pain. An emotion packed poem as always. A great write.

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