Thursday, February 15, 2007

Masked Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Joy shook my hand but masked
that I did not know his face~
Nor did I bother to unwrap him.
I had too many hands to bother.
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Melanie Emikohe
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Goldy Locks 15 February 2007

I dont like 'cloaked' in the first line; i want it to be like 'put out' that i did not know his.. face? Soo good - tho, movement of this piece & how it ends with the title. Gosh you give me goosebumps. ~ ~ sjg

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Melanie Emikohe

Melanie Emikohe

Philippines
Melanie Emikohe
Melanie Emikohe
Philippines
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