Mask Comments

The mistery of the mask hightens and tightens as we patiently wait for the unvailing and were ot diassapointed. Well written.

don't we ll hide behind a mask at some point in our lives, whether it be for good or bad, shame or anger, beautifully expressed, your a great poet :)

yes, , that`s so true.. A mask Whatever it proclaims Hides the very existence you are a great poet knows how to pen your feelings.. wish you all my best dear sweet poet.. hazem al..

But beyond the dying essence Jailed beauty remains these lines attracted me. a good write up. you have taken some efforts to make this well worded poem. today i posted some. pl read

lovely poem ' to a lovely friend-thanksfor sharing

what a lovely poem for Naru I like her too --10 anjali

A wonderful poem ofr (I presume) a wonderful friend. I truly enjoy this following lines - Upon the fountain of spirits Lovely face reflecting thee

Uncover the mask in you, look within in naked flesh, ask youself ' am i worth unmasked '? Excellent piece Min, lovely piece for our dear friend Naru.

A beautiful depiction of a young woman. I like these words and ideas of yours: Jailed beauty And here you are Upon the fountain of spirits. Mask or no mask a woman is still a mystery to be discovered and understood.

Excellent flow, very lyrical.

A wonderful poem. u get 10+++++++................

Though all wear masks There is my one friend The God send Who is without a mask of conciet and deciet No wonder i love her most. Good work and Good poem

How beautiful must be your great friend? ? ? ! ! ! ! I reallly wonder.......very good poem Min. I enjoyed reading it.

a heartfelt and sensitive dedication to your friend lucky them, whoever they are

a heartfelt and sensitive dedication to your friend lucky them, whoever they are

a good piece built out of good words adoring good fiiendship...your style here is lucid yet highly figurative, Min...i liked very much...10

lovely tribute and descriptive write to a friend... a very nice verses..that touched your friend hearts..I can see and feel in her comments...10***** Ency Bearis

Oh, My Dearest Friend Min Sia, I'm so touch with this poem, huhuhu... I just want to cry... First I just want to say many thanks for you, This's a my first time someone give me a poem, Hehehe... I'm so glad with our friendship, Even we just separated from so many island... I just wondering what plan of GOD that bring us to this friendship, But whatever it is, You here to always hear my story and share laugh and pain, Hope this friendship will be long lasting forever, may GOD hear us... I just can't reply anthing, but just a thanks... From A Far, In Upstairs, Your Friend, Naru Kaede,

beautiful..........hiding behind the mask.......something everyone does at certain times....well penned

Great imagery structured in free flowing verses. Beautiful message penned vividly for a friend...a 10/10