The robbers wear stocking cloak
The kids wear animal mask
We mask our vice with a smile
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You're so right. This is another great poem of yours. A 10 from me.
A ten from me and so true to human nature.can we ever really be true to ourselves.
true words, meaningful write these lines definitelty un-mask the wisdom lying beneath the mortal frame
Wisdom expressed in a few brief lines. Thank you for sharing. Kind regards, Sandra
I like unmasked life but musk fragrance of quintessence make me mad! well done......10+ as always
The kids love the animal maskes so natural, the vicious ones smile when there's little to smile in it, the stupid ones want to win, the ignorant ones to command.
Sometimes the person masks the lacks with a smile, but it is not so big minus... This a smile as a children's mask of innocence and frankness... Well write, Nightingale.. 10.... Tsira
very imaginative and well thought about. i like this poem 10/10
some wear a mask to hide their ture selfs and others just wear masks to have fun. bnice keep it up
Another brilliant gem of a poem, very true words - thank you for sharing! ! Best wishes! *10* Friend Thad
yes very true everyone wears the mask of themselves deep within
Very deep and meaningful pieceof writing, benefits from reading aloud! Nice work. Neil.
Sometimes its hard to see beyond a smile, excellent as always, 10 Lynda xx
Indeed! Neither can one bask into one's ignorance, neither can one mask it to oneself. One step to drive us further into our quest to the self... 10!
Yes ignorance, very true. Love with 10.