Mask Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Mask

Rating: 5.0


The robbers wear stocking cloak
The kids wear animal mask

We mask our vice with a smile
Our ignorance no one can bask

(2008/10/17)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 18 October 2008

Wisdom expressed in a few brief lines. Thank you for sharing. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 October 2008

I like unmasked life but musk fragrance of quintessence make me mad! well done......10+ as always

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 17 October 2008

The kids love the animal maskes so natural, the vicious ones smile when there's little to smile in it, the stupid ones want to win, the ignorant ones to command.

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Tsira Goge 17 October 2008

Sometimes the person masks the lacks with a smile, but it is not so big minus... This a smile as a children's mask of innocence and frankness... Well write, Nightingale.. 10.... Tsira

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Natasha Stubbs-Ennis 17 October 2008

very imaginative and well thought about. i like this poem 10/10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 October 2008

Yes ignorance, very true. Love with 10.

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Lindsey Ashton 23 October 2008

very good and is sometimes true for all of us

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Triin Kann 22 October 2008

You're so right. This is another great poem of yours. A 10 from me.

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A ten from me and so true to human nature.can we ever really be true to ourselves.

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Chitra - 19 October 2008

true words, meaningful write these lines definitelty un-mask the wisdom lying beneath the mortal frame

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