Saturday, April 16, 2005

Mascara Comments

Rating: 4.9

dab a brush of coal black color
unto your pale and fragile lashes
once you put it on. you become
giggling, twirling, oblivios
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gina prettybrowneyes
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The poem is pretty too. Top score

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Colleen Courtney 12 July 2014

When I was a teenager my Dad you to always ask why I needed to put my mask on when I would come downstairs with my face all made up. I always thought it was because I thought it made me look better. This poem suddenly brings up some unexplored questions so many years later. Nice reflective write.

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Kyle Jones 30 September 2006

Very thought provoking... yeah, what's the point of hiding your feelings or actions behind some mask? Great poem. _Love Kyle

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Uriah Hamilton 28 September 2006

How true: men and women wear a mask most of the time.

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Pia Andersson 31 July 2006

A poem that makes me think...why do we wear makup...do we really need..what are we trying to conceal...or reveal...a very interesting and wellwritten poem from you..I love it! !

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Daniel Hooks 29 January 2006

Good poem I appreciate why girls wear makeup now.To mask their insecurity maybe.

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Peter A. Crowther 21 May 2005

Interesting and thoughtful.

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