Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Mascara Tears And Lipstick Stains Comments

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Remember our lives before the pain.
When we didnt cry or feel the blame.
When we could count our time on our fingertips.
When you new what flavor I wore on my lips.
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Denise F. 24 September 2008

This is a very beautiful poem..a story of hopeful dreams crushed by reality...nicely written..thank you for sharing: -)

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Bree Swart 24 September 2008

It is actually amazing how much I can relate to this poem right now. I am on the verge of tears. Truely amazing..this is how me and my boyfriend were, we broke up today..Anyways..I would love it if you could critique me on some of my poems.. Have a great day.. Bree

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