Remember our lives before the pain.
When we didnt cry or feel the blame.
When we could count our time on our fingertips.
When you new what flavor I wore on my lips.
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It is actually amazing how much I can relate to this poem right now. I am on the verge of tears. Truely amazing..this is how me and my boyfriend were, we broke up today..Anyways..I would love it if you could critique me on some of my poems.. Have a great day.. Bree
This is a very beautiful poem..a story of hopeful dreams crushed by reality...nicely written..thank you for sharing: -)