Mary To Merry Comments

Some Girl An interesting contemplative write

sri devi17 minutes ago poetic

good Gajanan Mishra18 minutes ago nice Comment +1 nice

Very well penned and embrace poem I must say. Thank you for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! ~Xeniyah

Great poem it really describes what a woman thinks about when she is about to get married I give it a 10

the poem made me merry too: -)

This is brilliant :)

I may miss but not you miss... that sounds funny..ahehe..10

Great title, heck great poem. One day i hope to write the way you do. I gave it a 10

A lovely poem 'Mary to Merry'! the rhymes dominated this cute narratve...you're the rhyme master-thanks for inviting me to read your work...another 10

golden words/ a beautiful rhymed poem

'Was I not her so close friend' Left no way just to mend, Thought I put message and send, Will she buckle and tend to bend,

'Mary is going to marry', said friend, May be in days not in weeks, 'what, shouted I back” with just anger,

at the end of the rainbow...there is a pot of gold....imagine that...mary...to marry... that is the fact...bright eyed and all dress up...mary to marry...how delightful of you...to carry...took me on a trip your poem did...I loved the walk...and your talk...

'Mary is going to marry', said friend, May be in days not in weeks, 'what, shouted I back” with just anger, Yes, my dear, make no wonder,

some verses look like tongue twister, and its like a nursery rhyme, well penned, i like it, fun to read..

Has a lovely innocent feel about it.

very pure and original.. i like it so.. mary to mary... nice one..10+

Ink of Gold to send message to your heart. This poem is written in wonder and energy. Love lets us know not to worry. DC

it is good to have such nice poems...10