Mary's Poem - Continued Comments

Great addition Herbert! The first part was actually an assignment in my class last night. We had to write a 'When I was........' story. Most people wrote about their real childhoods in storybook form but of course I had to rhyme. (I can't stop myself!) This is very lovely and I really enjoy how this tale ends. Sincerely, Mary

Very sweet and innocent. You really have a wonderful range! :)