Monday, June 27, 2011

Mary Magdalene's Mug Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watched him
Dip his forefinger
Deep
Inside Mary Magdalene's mug,
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Chidi Anthony Opara, FIIM, CDOA
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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