Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Mary Jane Died Last Night Comments

Rating: 4.6

The younger sister
Of the second wife
Of my dear friend
Of forty-five years
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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 October 2021

My Note: This mesmerizing poem could also be The Member Poem Of The Day.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 October 2021

2) a very sad poem, most beautiful Eulogy, this poem has a natural summing up of all the things we would like to know, indeed so true what the poetess has said here.5 Stars fullest! Most touching Member Poem Of The Day

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 October 2021

This beautiful poem loveliest intrigues me, so sweetest worded, with great loving care, you feel that touch and emotive scents betwixt the lines,

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Quoth Theraven 01 September 2020

Somehow get the sense the poet was closer to Mary Jane than others known in life. It doesn't remove the fine patina that grew from the days. QtR

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A B Faniki 19 August 2019

A par for originality I enjoy readin this poem thus the topice is one of sadness.Beatitiful tribute

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

Well, she died last night. Just thought you might Like to know, Mary Jane died last night ..... beautiful

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Kim Barney 25 January 2019

Nicely done. I have lost friends and family members as well. This kind of resonates for each one of them. Thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2018

After reading this poem I condole the death of this lovely woman, may her soul rest in peace! Amen!

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Richard Wlodarski 12 November 2017

Francie, I was deeply moved by your heart wrenching ode to a very special human being. And your earthy style of writing. Mary Jane would be proud! Thank you for sharing your pain. And my condolences.

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 June 2017

Lovely poem. Your use of tone - perfectly conversational - creates some genuine pathos.

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Kim Barney 06 December 2016

Great poem, Francie. Wonderful tribute to Mary Jane.

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Atasha Williams 21 March 2016

Condolences for your dear friend. Death is as natural as birth

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2015

Death is part of us; may her soul rest in peace. Nice dedication.

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Wes Vogler 12 November 2015

Nicely done Francie. I have lost a good many friends in my 85 years and have written nothing that equals this little piece. May i dedicate it to some of them? i shall show it to my wife who is still with me after 61 years. Thank you luv... Wes (Old Dad)

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Melvina Germain 02 October 2015

This is so typical of the reality of life, how often do we hear such and stand in shock wondering why. Well thank you poet for this realistic view of life...10

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Seamus O Brian 05 August 2015

In the tumult of living, very few interactions leave one with a sense of enrichment. This one did. Thank you.

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Francie Lynch 06 August 2015

Thanks, Neal.

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Lyn Paul 20 May 2015

What a remarkable woman was Mary Jane, Dying at an age too young. You have written the most incredible heartfelt piece. This would be a beautiful piece for Mary Jane's eulogy at her final farewell. Thank you Francie, please let me know if you have a beautiful celebration for Mary Jane's life.

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Susan Lacovara 20 May 2015

Once in your life, forever on your heart. An amazing poem, tells the take of holes fragile and fast moving life actually is. Although I do not know Mary Jane, I do know how these emotions spill. Thank you for the artistic truth. PEACE

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Francie Lynch

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