Friday, September 25, 2020

Mary Had A Little Lamb... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mary had a little lamb,
Its fleece was white as snow.
And everywhere that Mary went,
The lamb was sure to go...
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 26 September 2020

Wickedly humorous poem Shaun, certainly not one to share with the kids! It's certainly not a fluffy, but a frightening five from me.

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Shaun Cronick 25 September 2020

This has been rewritten and an extra closing stanza added.

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L Milton Hankins 25 September 2020

This little poem is very humorous, even if the first stanza is borrowed (as it was intended to be!) .

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