Thursday, March 1, 2012

Marvelous Morning Comments

Rating: 2.5

Marvelous Morning
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Kulkarni Puttu
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Bonnie Lundgren 21 November 2017

If only half this poem was not nonsense phrases (reeding love? beaming designs? darting state? None of these evokes anything real; each is essentially meaningless) . If only it were not so illogical, this could be beautiful! Unfortunately, you cannot trade good rhythm for strong message and come out on top.

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