If only half this poem was not nonsense phrases (reeding love? beaming designs? darting state? None of these evokes anything real; each is essentially meaningless) . If only it were not so illogical, this could be beautiful! Unfortunately, you cannot trade good rhythm for strong message and come out on top.
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If only half this poem was not nonsense phrases (reeding love? beaming designs? darting state? None of these evokes anything real; each is essentially meaningless) . If only it were not so illogical, this could be beautiful! Unfortunately, you cannot trade good rhythm for strong message and come out on top.