Sunday, April 1, 2018

Marvellous Human Brain Comments

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Marvellous human brain
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marvel human brain
stores old and new life's events
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narayana aghalaya
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Doug Bentley 24 February 2019

a brain without a heart is a killer reflex- kill or be killed- with a heart- the golden rule. science is a brain without a heart when a scientist builds bombs for a soldier to explode. heart leads, brain follows.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 April 2018

marvel human brain stores old and new life's events recalls, with no pain; great ideas, tools -invents wheel, bulb..thousands of, patents.....I just plucked out the first stanza but all stanzas are magnificently built up! This is poem of high substance! You have amazingly portrayed brain and brain power through this excellent poem!

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2018

God is a scientist gave us brain, to live in peace sad, a flaw exists, which has caused much peace to cease......praising God for creating the brain......... how wondrous are your works o God the creator of heaven and earth..... i want to sing along with you. i believe also just as u believe and praise God.......... thank u dear poet. tony

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Narayana Aghalaya 06 April 2018

Thank you dear poet!

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Akhtar Jawad 04 April 2018

A brain, specially a human brain, is nature's work of art and so is this poem.

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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

Thank you, Mr.Akhtar Jawad, for your appreciation!

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Valsa George 03 April 2018

much work, by instinct mind-stored-programs, are handy precise and succinct a sense for things fine and, dandy without it, where would we be? The last line in this stanza is one over which I often brood, especially when I see Dementia and Alzheimer's affected people in whom the brain function is very feeble! Without brain, where we would be....? ? Shudder to think of it! A great poem!

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Narayana Aghalaya 03 April 2018

I had not thought of dementia.Thanks for drawing my attention!

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Poet With No 01 April 2018

The marvellous human brain - Devises ways to kill millions of people and slaughtered tens of millions more in wars throughout the centuries. Oppressed entire races and made them into slaves. The marvellous human brain - Builds missiles with 16 programmable nuclear warheads to destroy every city on the planet. You wrote a splendid poem But I think you have too much faith In something that will soon be extinct.

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Narayana Aghalaya 01 April 2018

dear Poet, Thanks for your interesting comment. I agree with you- we are heading towards extinction. I am looking at it in a different way. We are God's experiment. Sometimes experiments go wrong. Some parts don't work as planned. Like our cars develop engine problems. There is some flaw in our wiring. This can only lead us to extinction. After that MarkII man will appear -good in all respects and with no defects. Because our brains are too good to be discarded!

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Narayana Aghalaya 01 April 2018

I have added two stanzas to address your concerns!

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Rajnish Manga 01 April 2018

The power and potential of human brain is no less than a miracle. Beautifully articulated in this poem. Thanks a lot.

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