Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Thursday, April 4, 2013

Martin’s Stand-Off Comments

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Martin's Stand-Off

How Martin felt lonely and, oh, how he felt sad;
He heard Mother calling but he felt like being bad.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 May 2013

Aha kids r notty but malleable n yor poem is an admirable epic narrative! Kudos.

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Valerie Dohren 01 May 2013

A lovely story Adeline - enjoyed reading. I feel sorry for his mum and dad though! !

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Mary Forrester 21 April 2013

Loved your poem Adeline.

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Shahzia Batool 21 April 2013

much of the content keeps a personal context, but the poem is still the property of its readers...so nice to see you back...thanks...

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Dan Reynolds 05 April 2013

Nice work Adeline. Shades of Alice, with some more contemporay humour.

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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