Marrige You Wanna? Comments

Love and its lost? wasted opportunity? Due to drug taking? ? ? I find it sad maybe its anout sadness

Really good intresting poem

Read your poem and found myself reading it again to try and read between your lines. Whoever, Mary-Jane is must be what is on your brain and who is in your heart is Love? Love is something you take a chance on when you let your heart rule your head. As you get older you learn this, so entering contact of marraige is what is in your head. Finding one that is in your head and heart is priceless. Liked your peom. Having to read a poem again after the first read is a good peom when it held your interest on the first read. Don't cloud the head though too much it will make you lazy, , , .

this poem has alot of emotions in it and i dont know how but, i really love this peom because its just naturally lovely.

Smoke, brother and keep your lovely lady in your heart. Good read.

I see where it's coming from...nicely put

well, the poem is nicely done...my goshhhhhhhh, hope ur not using mari juana my dearest...

really nice and it luks like it came from u heart.