Thursday, February 8, 2018

Married Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

We rise in the morning
To see the first light of day
We kiss goodbye
And go our own way;
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Paul Reed
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Judith Blatherwick 08 February 2018

The use of the two stanzas makes it feel that nothing between those two small events matters, therefore emphasising their importance. This gives the poem a strength which is greater than its simplicity (which i like greatly) first suggests.

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