Marriage Personality Danger Splinters Poem by Terence George Craddock

Marriage Personality Danger Splinters

Rating: 5.0


a fatal marriage personality danger
is marrying too young to a personality
who is ego intensely in love with self
who has not learned to love other souls

a fatal marriage personality danger
is marrying a person who never matured
who still believes world revoles around self
who wants takes seldom gives worth to friends

ask why ask a shrink
spoilt selfish never shared
never taught giving joys

errors occur in egoes
children pampered accessories
spoilt rotten show pieces


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Wednesday, December 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: marriage,personality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Complete version of the split images 'Marriage Personality Choice Disorders', 'Spoilt Brat Origin Causes' and 'Spoilt Children Spoilt Personalities' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
Written in December 2015 on the 24.12.2015.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 23 December 2015

I often discuss poetry from time to time with friends, review comments, I like Luis Estable for the ease of defining his poetic expectations, conformity of rigid topic, but I will only write this way if when I deem it appropriate. So the last three comments received, two through facebook and the comment below. From the Project Judith (which is presently prose awaiting transformation into poetry 'Thanks Terence Craddock. It is a beautiful piece.' From the poet and friend Gregory Uhan 'Thanks, Terence. I always enjoy your poetry. Your writing addressed to artists/ poets always hits home. You are a poet's poet. But even beyond that you always manage to tackle politics and theology with great accuracy. And your poems one on one with nature are absolutely brilliant. Most of all, thank you, for being a friend and always supporting me.' So two out of three, good enough for Meatloaf, good enough for me, but actually one out of 10 good poems is enough, friends critics have differing tastes, but the joy is writing; and presently I am enjoying dedicating pieces to other poets and must be a lucky phase, feedback is usually positive and appreciate and I promised delections on request. God Bless all poets who love poetry, freedom of expression, Happy Christmas and New Year or Happy Holidays as everyone desires for our up coming Christmas and to Greg who blesses my world with friendship. :)

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Terry Craddock 23 December 2015

Anyone ever notice that marriage problems jump from place to place, and therefore it might be appropriate to deliberately jump from place to place when discussing marriage, because the theme is marriage problems which do jump from place to place. True or false? Poetry is sometimes a question of taste, which is why people follow favourite artists which is good; themes subjects styles interests vary and readers often pursue topics of interest. Some can follow complicated or convoluted topics and themes some cannot, some topics demand specific topics styles others are open, while some poems are concise others are open. This poem says exactly what it is meant to say, not a word more or less, but as most people realize art poetry is subjective, the artist chooses from many forms tones narration techniques, and what a poet intends can best be determined by how the poet says it. One style tone or Picasso diversity, seeking new forms, new methods of expression, many forms of sonnet exist few chose to write like Shakespeare; poetry is freedom of choice, I choose diversity freedom of thought to express in flights of fantasy as I choose. Enjoy the journey :)

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