Wednesday, December 26, 2012

Marriage: Not A Licence Comments

Rating: 5.0

You call it love
your tool of torture
upon my body,
on my soul.
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Aimanu B. Ali
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Saadat Tahir 29 December 2012

a heart rending painful howl... echoes across the frozen tundra, the waste land of a marriage gone sour due to uncaring insistence and threatening swagger. a ghoulish and hellish scenario.... has in it the seeds of eternal discord. Depicted vividly and painfully.... as close to the truth as words and lines allow, what to make of tradition and mores. a great social enigma, a girl is presented with these tattered cards.... so how does she play... a deeply distressing dilemma. heart felt and touching...nicely written,

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Tony Karas 26 December 2012

(((hug))) Marriage is a partnership, a blending of two souls, hearts and lives into one. Or so it was meant to be.

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Paul Brookes 26 December 2012

So well written. Such sadness and despair. To be tangled in the web of tradition must be hard.: O( 10/10

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