Sunday, March 3, 2019

Marriage Is A Vow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Marriage is a vow that two people make
To honor and cherish and never forsake.
Two hearts entwined to become as one
With the blessings of Gods only son.
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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 March 2019

A thoughtfully envisioned song of life expressing the ideals to be cherished by life partners tied with the knot of marriage. A great message in the modern age when the very relationship if becoming more and more volatile under influences from social factors etc.10 points.

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louis rams 04 March 2019

thank you for that beautiful comment and words of truth

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Practicing Poetess 03 March 2019

Another spot-on poem about Marriage, by poet Louis Rams, who accurately depicts it. Someone once told me that in marriage, your joys are multiplied, while your sorrows are halved. What a shame that marriage, as an institution, is no longer in favour amongst much younger people. Because marriage still works, when done properly. Thank you for this wonderful poem, Louis! : -)

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louis rams 04 March 2019

my thanks to you my poetic sister for your words of truth

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