Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Marriage And Honeymoon (Ghazal) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your meetings are nice but separation is a boon,
I talk to stars and walk with the moon,
While jogging on the tracks of the Milky Ways,
I search a place for our honeymoon.
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Melvina Germain 09 October 2015

You create magic with your intense and beautiful words, your poems read like charms being rubbed in the palm of ones hand, warm and soothing. Thank you for Blessing me this morning with your delightful words.....

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2014

So sweet and heartwarming. Akhtarji you are a master when it comes to going back to memory and picking the stars out. thank you for sharing.

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Valsa George 05 December 2014

While jogging on the tracks of the Milky Ways, I search a place for our honeymoon. Haven't found any place that suits to you, Going back to the days of honeymoon even in memory is a pleasure! With such sweet assurance from you, she must have been counting down the days with great expectation! A sweet poem!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 December 2014

This is so sweetly penned makes it classic in itself.........amazing piece.....10/10

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