This odd couple
Must have been blind
When they said, “I do”
Till the end of time
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Very clever, such are the tribulations of a multifaceted personality
wow i love the wording and expression sounds like sumof my friends marriages lol
There are a few rhythmic glitches as I call them here. But this is good as well. I gave it a 9. GW62
always like poems that demystify marriage