Marriage Comments

Thanx To The Doctor/// Nurse to my pulse, / Contanance at sunrise./ RH Peat

Never doubt my love the waxing, waning through to caducity of our years. a very fine poem.. dev

so simple and deep...says a lot..loved the emotions behind the thought.Excellent! ! !

Never doubt my love the waxing, waning through to caducity of our years. and the title of the poem is marriage. love, doubt, problems, intensity of emotions and real love and passion. thank you very much for making the reader think a lot. thank you. tony

Nice work with the muse of marriage.

'Marriage'! 'Waxing' along but, with hope. Nice work.

The combination of title and last word took me by surprise. In between the romantic feelings were expressed so beautifully. A loved filled heart finds beauty every where. Loved the whole poem. Thanks for sharing.

Wow, this one is like a continuation of the solace quantum. The unknown gardener seems to have a very special space in the heart of the sparrow. All sparrows are born with a heart full of space, full of kindness and full of love. It is good to keep the gardener in that very special space but at the same time not to neglect all the other wonderful spaces and rooms in that same wonderful heart of the sparrow. Beauty is said to be in the eye of the beholder, but that is not completely true, there is so much beauty in every sparrow too.

love you needed so heeded it isfelt through words be happy always and look forward

Very inspiring, full of vivid love and hope!

Never doubt my love.. through the caducity of years.. innocent love and faithfulness . love without conditions.. well portrayed thank you

Hi Rachel, I love your reference to older English. A true blue dedication without conditions. Love as pure as it comes. Thanks for sharing, Paul

A lovely poem having a complete belief on love and being devoted to it. Very nice.

every word penned, holds so much weight, so much meaning. The gardener is unknown but these words are so real. And Marriage is beautiful!

My heart given will never convert love was anchored ever 'morrows'- -So deep the love is! It is sure of all 'morrows'! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

Marriage the ring of love that cements two hearts together which if true will last forever and the poem lets the reader know the poets will...reagard

You have taught me a new word (caducity) . At least you will have taught it to me as soon as I look it up to see what it means! Thank you.

It is hard to keep one's perspective when passion and desire are running high.

Love, love, love, Your love is ever amazing and fresh Lovely words and wonderful dress

A strong affirmation of true love that I find is very romantic in its undertones.