Marriage Comments

Amazing! ! ! ! ! I loved all of the imagery

what intelligentness! i almost shed three tears. ah, what words can do.... flamage! ! ! !

when shall they free bobby shmurda

bruh i dont know how dat make u cry

A lot of conventional, middle-class ideas are on display, and considered here. He is so undecided about marriage, even to ' a beautiful sophisticated woman/ tall and pale wearing an elegant black dress and black gloves'. Or the film star Ingrid Bergman. Not ever being married is no problem to me and I don't think it was for Greg Corso.

This might be my favorite poem - what genius!

A well depicted theme of marriage. Lovely piece and well communicated. SYLVA-ONYEMA

WOW! What an epic write, all about the facets of a marriage or being married. This poem with its 1036 words and 111 lines over several alineas., yeah how many alineas was that again? Nine alineas. Truly detailed. A coziest imaginative poem and Congrats to his family on being chosen as MPOTD (Modern Poem Of The Day) . A 10 Vote.

An imaginative write with nice structure. Beautiful poem shared.

The bath of life! ! With the muse of marriage! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Your words bring such laughter and some fear. Excellent imagery of what may happen. Hope you do get married..... but only if your heart says so! Cheers as you may need a drink.

And all the dreams built on the back of a teenage date? Now that's imagination.

Makes me cry every time I read it.

Absolutley love this poem!