Saturday, March 1, 2008

Marriage Comments

Rating: 4.8

Marriage is the joining of two bodies and two minds
Past mistakes are unwanted and better left behind
From this day forth you must take care of each other
You’ll learn to draw strength each day from one another
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David Pennington 15 February 2018

I've been given the poem 'Marriage' to read at a wedding. in the last line, is it 'envelope' or 'envelop'. Not being a poet or anything, but the definition of 'envelop' seems more appropriate? Your thoughts please.

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C. P. Sharma 17 February 2010

Sane advice and poetic too. CP

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Stacy S 03 April 2008

This is a very nice poem. I am trying to write some love poems and I was in the process of writing a poem about marriage. I couldnt even come close to your poem! lol. Well done and keep up the great poetry!

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