Marriage Comments

Sallie I love it. So typical of many a union with the first throes of discovery of one another without a care where it may be heading to the endurance of speed bumps and finally the sweet companionship....10

A beautiful job is done. Very nice composition.10 for it.

Very well done, Sallie. Ron

profound, beautiful thanks for sharing

A beautiful extended metaphor. Susie xx.

Hi Sallie, I like how you put this together...a true view of how marriage can unfold. For some the boat sinks and they swim to opposite shores..........wonderful write! All the best, Diane

Nice work here, Sallie...Lots of vivid imagework & well released verve... Mellifluous structural work...Rock Solid Crafting, indeed! FjR