Sunday, April 6, 2008

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I stare out,
Onto the shore line
Gazing to the depths,
Into the eyes of a vicious sea…
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David Desantis 10 April 2008

really very cool dude. I love the imagery. Isn't it amazing what women can do to us? Haha I'm sure you can see it in my writing. They are fodder for alot of poems, but I guess that's the beauty of love. Anyhow, i really like the beach descriptions, I could really picture it in this one. Great job

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Original Unknown Girl 08 April 2008

Wonderful sentiments penned when pushed to your limits is what I've getting here. Good write Empath... HG: -) xx

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