Saturday, June 19, 2021

Marooned (Part 6 Of 6) Comments

Rating: 5.0

[Continued from part 5]

A pretty girl I hadn't noticed before
walked up to me and handed me
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Cowboy Ron Williams
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3) And, as PoemHunter has been cheating with numbers nowadays, I am looking for the next part numbered "7 out of 6". But poor me. Cowboy Ron Williams is not PoemHunter. He numbers his poems correctly

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2) But it may be the other way too. Cupid would have got tired after working day and night all these days (and nights) .

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Good. Hilarious! From the start, looking at the comments of Bri, I was pretty sure that he was hiding behind some bush on the island, spying and prying on you all! But, it may be the other way…

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Bri Edwards 19 December 2022

Hey, Ron, it's gettin' late AND I want to save more comments and stars for another day so there should be more chance for PH readers to notice my attention to youir series (in Notifications) . Bye for now. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 19 December 2022

Ron, what WAS the 'different title'? ? ? And you did NOT mention Beach Girl (one of MY favorites] by name in Part 1. I guess she was included in those MANY unnamed GIRLS.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 28 June 2021

I can't tell if the computer is accepting my replies to all of your comments, so thank you everyone, for commenting!

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Varsha M 20 June 2021

Contd.....Waiting for Bri' s take on the prompt for Jussica already settled down for she booked which Bri missed for fraction of inches. I think you deserve a big round of applause for this.

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Varsha M 20 June 2021

This is a beautiful composition just the one that rose horns but then settled down the moment Bri was around expecting some more was woven but it was Bri's story how could Ron steal it anyway.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 19 December 2022

Huh? What do you mean it was Bri's story? Ron didn't steal it. Ron (I) wrote it. Bri had no knowledge of it until after it was written.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 June 2021

A wonderful poem! Extremely well written..5 stars

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Very funny, Cowboy. It took you a long time to finally post part 6!

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