Marooned Mariner Comments

Sometimes from recuperative moments like this poem describes, emerges the most beautiful and sweet fruit: and this poem is the example! A heart-warming write!

I am sorry that I could not read this poem earlier. You met an accident somewhere in March/April,2016 but I came to know it, today when I read the poet's note of this touching poem. Hope you are now perfectly all right. May God bless you!

Hoping that you already have recovered i do notice here that your vivid world of the large vocabulary is a world of itself which helps even us far away to get into that world of the scenaries depicted by your pen.I do feel obliged to it, dear lady.

Often the feelings of loneliness and desolation take hold of us when we feel marooned and forsaken and this feeling has been so very beautifully verbalised in this immensely lovely poetic narration; culminating on a hesitant positive note. A very lovely write indeed, Valsa. Wishing you a speedy recovery.

Excellent write Valsa! It conveys a sense of loneliness v effectively. The imagery used throughout the poem is absolutely beautiful. Words come from the depths of heart making the reader feel the pain of loneliness in all its intensity. Full of poetic beauty, this is one of my favorite poems from you. A plus.

When in trouble we sometimes feel helpless and lonely in life. This feelings come to most of us sometimes in life. Very nice. Liked it.

but on poem hunter you can depend we are all like Kipling's the thousandth man you can read or you can write and your loneliness will soon take flight

A beautiful poem expressing the pain deep inside. Wish you a speedy recovery.

Loneliness- an allowed devil or result of traumatic cause, wakes up the heart of a solitude person to jot down a couplet of the kind. In one such stance did I write a piece of work Moaning Board Get well soon dear Mam!

Many of us feel the loneliness your excellent poem portrays. I wish you a full and speedy recovery