Marooned Comments
They placed their ears to the ground
to pick up the slightest sound
A nomad family was in the desert marooned
for days at the mercy of the sun and moon
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this is really a sad write and very touching, Sandra.The message you wanted to deliver is loud and clear..and...my heart bleeds for them..I cannot comment further. A well crafted piece of an intelligent woman who have a big heart. From my heart to yours.. A big hug, Meggie
Help arrived in the form of a straying camel They rode to freedom on this loving animal.... so much mhated but beautiful animal... lovely write.... read mine 'Modern poetry'
very colorful write indeed sandra! ! ! ! ! ! ..... enjoyed it very much, thanks for this one....deserves a 10 with love shan
Well written piece Sandra...i liked the the soft tone of sadness and compassion the poem carries inside...thanks...10
Such a touching poem Sandra. Nomads do have to leave the elderly to die when they are too old to travel. And the poem had a bittersweet ending. All in rhyme too. Excellent work! 10 Karin Anderson
spirit more than the man...brought help in the form of a camel..a lovely story with a positive end..optimistic too....well written
a soulful yet picturesque poem... an understanding of a different life style and compassion foer them too.. beauty...reallly enjoyed it cheers an ten
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8/14/2025 7:32:50 AM # 1.0.0
What a story. It must be true and I wonder how many times it has happened with both happy and sad endings. Thanks for making me think. Sometimes it is good to forget about our own peevish problems now and then. (smile)