Friday, February 21, 2014

Marking Time Comments

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I like the marks Time's made on my body and my face
They talk about a journey and not about a race
Some things I learned quite quickly
Other things came slow
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Lynn Anne Brown
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Nia Schexnider 21 February 2014

Very good poem, but I'd like to give a little constructive criticism - I feel the ending is not as conclusive as you intended. But I really enjoyed the simplicity of the thought. Thanks for sharing

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Lynn Anne Brown

Lynn Anne Brown

Toronto, Ontario, Canada
Lynn Anne Brown
Lynn Anne Brown
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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