Wednesday, May 24, 2017

~ Mark Zuckerberg Poem ~ Comments

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Through trust and dedication we can succeed
Overcoming the demands of strife.
By deeds of honor we protect and preserve
Our family, country and values of life.
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Jefferson Carter 24 May 2017

Tom, a good poem is more than admirable sentiments chopped into rhyming lines. Try immersing yourself in some good contemporary poetry, that is, if you want to improve as a poet. You might benefit from reading Billy Collins or Mary Oliver. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com If you like it, perhaps share it whit friends who might be interested? Thank you. JC

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