With dreams of Happy life
got married and brought home his wife
with zillion thoughts he entered his room
only to find his bride sound asleep
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Aha! That's a nice one. All we men will be indebted to you for being on our side. Very nicely written.
had a man written this, the pseudo feminists would be up in arms calling it 'sexist' and 'unreal'. A man is usually cowed down to not reveal his worry 'cause of his 'manliness'. i guess a lot of men out there get a 'beating' too and never talk about it. poetry wise, well written tragi-comedy/parody on life 10/10
hello...Deepti Nice one i think you have been inspired with few parctical examples happened around you..I am sure you are not the one you have described here..Just Kidding Great Job
intersting poem....pls read my poem called my life, my wife and I CAN DIE
yes this too happens in real world..............the women misuses the laws that are meant to protect them.............and yes you can call the marital rape of man....Good Write..........Innovative ideas..........woman seeing the law from a man point of view............10+++..................
Well, I suppose it could be described as such, when a man who loves is treated in such a way. I have heard of this. I am reminded of a poem of mine called THE CORE OF SIN. I won't give it away, but the essence of this writing is contained in it. Though it is a very different writing. GW62
lines done wit sense of imagination picturin whats happenin n real world.................displayed both side of a life coin in a beautiful way........thanks for sharing......sebastine
a very different subject presented really differently- thanks for sharing
that was an untouched subject which u presented well...
'Is it not 'Marital Rape of a man' where Love, Patience and Devotion are crushed. ' Wow! Good work Deepti. 10.
oh yes, men are also victimised in marriage. it is sad the law is partial to women, and at times they get away with murder and leave him bankrupt. we are all human, feel hurt when spurned, disrespected. very fine compassionate poem Deepti.10
an intense well penned write, bringing out the other side of the coin, you have the courage to speak for such men, and that too you being a women, hats off
the title of the poem is so apt and catchy-it is true in this world where materialism reigns supreme at times women- who are supposed to be an epitome of love puts up a tardy form and ruin many lives at a go! deepti after all it takes all type of people to make this world.very well propounded
a mis match...a mis marriage...such things can happen in life...an urge for vengeance perhaps prior to her marriage, could have been rooted in the mind of that woman...a ten for the nice narration
...a 10 for this painfull story with poetic beauty. I am touched!
Aspiring Inspiring Marvelous Enchanting Enlightening ...... word hard to describe what you have penned on paper.... ......a simply perfect vision of the current scenario...... .....idealist....spectacular..... magnificent.....