Saturday, October 21, 2017

Marital Bliss Comments

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An old couple sat on a bench in a park
Side by side but a little apart
The sun's slanting afternoon rays
Glistened on their silver heads
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2017

It is a beautiful poem a on attachment having stunning expression with nice collocation. The couple sitting on bench in the park enjoyed love and attachment though they have different outlook. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 October 2017

Though they are engaged in different activities, their bonding of love is intact as they sitting together and enjoying mutually agreed activities.. loved your poem

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