Monday, November 10, 2008

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See me dance, dance for you
Move my arms, my leg
You give me everything
Nothing from you I beg
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Barbara Vanier
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Joseph Poewhit 10 November 2008

How love can make us puppets

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 10 November 2008

gorgeous! remind me of Petrouchka by Stravinsky. keep writing! Dear, friend. Could you read and comment on my new poems such as Kartini, Pattimura, Teuku Umar, Tuanku Imam Bonjol, Sultan Hasanuddin, I Gusti Ngurah Rai, Yos Sudarso, Urban, Love your day! , Self, Chance, Process, Question, Search, Purple, Wanderer, Beauty, Lady Luck, Positive, Perfume, Fashion, Chic, Patience, Ready, and other new poems, please? Thank you very much.

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Barbara Vanier

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