Saturday, January 5, 2013

Marines (Thought) Comments

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I chose to join the marines today.
To be put in a boat and shipped away.
Off to training, fire and aiming.
For I chose to join the marines today.
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Poet of the River
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Kevin Patrick 18 January 2013

Although I respect the valour and dedication soldiers do to protect our country (mine, your, and everyone elses) I cannot condone the things that occure, your poem lists several of those things. which I am uneased. Taking order is never an excuse to commite horrible evils in the name of freedom.

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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